Happy Friday the 13th (the day NOT the movie)

I really like Fridays, and to me the "13th" is just a number.  At the end of the week I get to relax a little and catch up on "stuff" I've neglected around the house and at my computer.  I'm starting on the new ideas I want to implement into my next release.  Yeah, the story's been done like *forever,* BUT it needs tweaking to make it better.  I was fortunate last year to have a critique of a few pages and was given some really great advice.  That advice has brewed, and now I'm going to act on that advice.

So, #1. attitude change for a secondary (supporting) character, #2. that change will add conflict to an already conflicted main character (cue evil laugh and rubbing of hands together...), #3. change the ending to reflect the first two.

Back into my cave I go.

See ya.

~R