Second Time Around

I'm starting over editing ST. Not that the last round was bad, I've just been away from it for a month and I need to start again fresh. So, tomorrow I'll be good and start editing from the veeery beginning of page 1. Hopefully this little break away from the story will have given me the strength necessary to cut out 23 pages of non-essential prose and stream line the story better. I neeed to start up the tension faster. The action needs to rachet higher more quickly in chapter one. I need to get my main characters in trouble pronto, not on page 5, but ASAP.

So, that's my plan and I'm sticking to it. Updates will be forthcoming.

~A